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Martin Mc Carthy's avatar

What a genuinely lovely and sincere tribute to your friends, Ella and Oliver on their wedding day! May it be part of the highlights that they will always remember. The last verse is my favourite:

Then it was done, as the day

packed itself away and the lights came on

the way the campfires did for our ancestors

in caves or jungles or out on the dry savannah

and the cycle begins again - that ancient thing within -

under the stars, under the moon, one love - one more forever

Nazish Nasim's avatar

I thought you were a talker! What a beautiful poem. Did you read it to the couple?

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