Summer Delicious
Today's taste of Australia... (from the land of the Awabakal and Worimi people)
I have found some sumptuous ocean poetry on Substack - words to turn over in my mouth and relish, like sea polished pebbles on a beach. (Rebecca Hooper writing at “Between Two Seas” is a writer I highly recommend).
The sea, also, resides in all of us - our salty cells surely feel the grip and pull of the moon - we are ourselves mostly just self aware water.
Today’s poem really is “Today’s poem,” scribbled in my notebook this morning as I sat with a self indulgent coffee at the seaside cafe here - pictured below - after submitting myself to the surge and splash of the Pacific Ocean, on this beach in my old home town where my first memories of the sea were sown. It’s still officially Spring here, rather than Summer, but it was one of those late Spring days when you can pretend that Summer has come already…..
Summer Delicious
This is the sea
taking great green
licks of the land –
a hot Summer
ice cream of sand and
sun saturated flesh,
oil basted and baked.
All the rush and wash
of the waves fills my ears
the way a lung
full of air fills a swimmer –
urgent, instinctive, unstoppable
then used up
metabolised
gone… aching
for replenishment.
This is the sea’s breathing,
on and on and on beyond
the warm sunlit shallows
of consciousness,
sinking deeper,
where whales hover in blue
shadows speaking, singing;
where fish swim
oblivious of names and the moon
pulls a whole ocean
tugging, adjusting, tucking in -
a cool clean sheet
in a giant room
on an endless
sandy
bed.
And yes, the day ended with a storm, as Summer days here often do. Not that it’s officially Summer here yet - we are really just in the middle of Spring - and no, although the first photo was taken today, this photo is not actually of today’s storm. You will just have to regard it as representative…
Have I passed my Poetic Licence test yet??
If you liked Summer Delicious - you might enjoy reading what my Summer became:




I love this! especially "where whales hover in blue
shadows speaking, singing;
where fish swim
oblivious of names and the moon
pulls a whole ocean –"
the imagery is gorgeous and the line break at moon/pulls is so brilliantly done.
thank you for sharing, and also for the lovely recommendation!
(currently waiting for the painting on its way to you and Meg to dry - it will be sent this week!)
David, from beach to beach , the sea and surrounds draws words from each of us. What a glorious ' scribble' you made there. Yes, I could see with your coffee and I could feel the sand , look around and see what you saw in that moment of notice and you paint with your words such a vivid scene ,and what it draws from your being, so unique to you and universal in its beauty.
Fair to say, I loved this.