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rebecca hooper's avatar

I love this! especially "where whales hover in blue

shadows speaking, singing;

where fish swim

oblivious of names and the moon

pulls a whole ocean –"

the imagery is gorgeous and the line break at moon/pulls is so brilliantly done.

thank you for sharing, and also for the lovely recommendation!

(currently waiting for the painting on its way to you and Meg to dry - it will be sent this week!)

Jillian Quinn Wheaton's avatar

David, from beach to beach , the sea and surrounds draws words from each of us. What a glorious ' scribble' you made there. Yes, I could see with your coffee and I could feel the sand , look around and see what you saw in that moment of notice and you paint with your words such a vivid scene ,and what it draws from your being, so unique to you and universal in its beauty.

Fair to say, I loved this.

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