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Kate Bown's avatar

Beautiful words and photos, as always Dave.

My favourite lines:

I am lip reading landscape.

I am finding the the punctuation of geology, coral clumps and coves,

I am learning the unwritten grammar of seaweed, of shells and of sand.

And such a hopeful ending seeing your little dragonfly, in the air.

I am down at my little Boatshed, a rare 2hrs to myself in the school holidays. Trying to sink into writing and my heart, it’s been very busy and I am trying to find my way back to writing by reading poetry. Your words and helping mine. Thank you :)

School of Blue's avatar

This reminds me of one of the first posts I read of yours at the end of 2024, Dave. It inspired me to write my own on about the Desert Road in Aotearoa / New Zealand. I love how you weave the landscapes of your neigbourhood to make a profound point about being human.

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