Apple
Concrete poetry seems out of fashion these days, but it can still be fun.
Try eating this apple. It makes grammatical, and sensual sense, if you start in the right place and read in the correct direction…..
Photo above: Paris street art, Montmartre, October 2023.
"Psyche revived by Cupid's kiss" by Antonio Canova - 1793. Louvre Museum.
Hello David,
I have made my way to your concrete poem from your comment on mine and I really love how you created yours! Very visual and wonderful arrangement of words! I love that the words create the outline and the depth of meaning is enhanced as with "your skin thin like this fruit", which makes this description not on visible, but felt. Nice! Now on to your next. Appreciate you for sharing these! Blessings, ~Wendy💜
Ohh I love the visual (and sensory) journey of this poem, David!